Comments for Shari's Telling Stories http://slstellingstories.com A little poetry, a little prose, from Shari Lynne Smothers Thu, 28 Jul 2011 21:40:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 Comment on Ring Through by Shari Smothers http://slstellingstories.com/2011/07/ring-through/comment-page-1/#comment-1130 Shari Smothers Thu, 28 Jul 2011 21:40:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6792#comment-1130 Hi s Michelle: It's funny as I drive around and see all the major changes in the cityscape, it's many of the little things that speak loudly to me. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Sorry I was late checking the comments. Not sure why yours got hung up. I hope you don't mind that I took the liberty of combining both your comments. Shari Hi s Michelle:

It’s funny as I drive around and see all the major changes in the cityscape, it’s many of the little things that speak loudly to me. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Sorry I was late checking the comments. Not sure why yours got hung up. I hope you don’t mind that I took the liberty of combining both your comments.

Shari

]]> Comment on Ring Through by Shari Smothers http://slstellingstories.com/2011/07/ring-through/comment-page-1/#comment-1131 Shari Smothers Thu, 28 Jul 2011 21:40:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6792#comment-1131 Hi s Michelle: It's funny as I drive around and see all the major changes in the cityscape, it's many of the little things that speak loudly to me. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Sorry I was late checking the comments. Not sure why yours got hung up. I hope you don't mind that I took the liberty of combining both your comments. Shari Hi s Michelle:

It’s funny as I drive around and see all the major changes in the cityscape, it’s many of the little things that speak loudly to me. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Sorry I was late checking the comments. Not sure why yours got hung up. I hope you don’t mind that I took the liberty of combining both your comments.

Shari

]]> Comment on Ring Through by s Michelle http://slstellingstories.com/2011/07/ring-through/comment-page-1/#comment-1128 s Michelle Thu, 28 Jul 2011 02:50:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6792#comment-1128 Shari, This coaxed a big smile from me. The familiarity of home, bells welcoming, how even the everyday ordinary can cause the hairs on the back of your neck stand up. Reading this made the hairs on the back of my neck stand at attention. I also love the confidence of the speaker's voice, such quiet strength. The confidence rings true in this piece, I like it all Shari. Shari,
This coaxed a big smile from me. The familiarity of home, bells welcoming, how even the everyday ordinary can cause the hairs on the back of your neck stand up. Reading this made the hairs on the back of my neck stand at attention. I also love the confidence of the speaker’s voice, such quiet strength.

The confidence rings true in this piece, I like it all Shari.

]]> Comment on Early by Shari Smothers http://slstellingstories.com/2011/07/early/comment-page-1/#comment-1116 Shari Smothers Fri, 08 Jul 2011 12:05:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6637#comment-1116 Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Stacy. I like the first part too. :) Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Stacy. I like the first part too. :)

]]> Comment on Early by Stacy Floyd http://slstellingstories.com/2011/07/early/comment-page-1/#comment-1115 Stacy Floyd Fri, 08 Jul 2011 00:50:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6637#comment-1115 Shari, what a clever piece.  I really like your word choices, simple, but highly effective.  You nailed that 1st stanza Shari,
what a clever piece.  I really like your word choices, simple, but highly effective.  You nailed that 1st stanza

]]> Comment on Informed by Shari Smothers http://slstellingstories.com/2011/05/informed/comment-page-1/#comment-1082 Shari Smothers Tue, 24 May 2011 14:57:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6612#comment-1082 Hi Divya! I'm glad you like the poem. And thanks so much for visiting my blog. I look forward to reading your writing, too, at She Writes and Open Spaces. Hi Divya! I’m glad you like the poem. And thanks so much for visiting my blog. I look forward to reading your writing, too, at She Writes and Open Spaces.

]]> Comment on Informed by Shari Smothers http://slstellingstories.com/2011/05/informed/comment-page-1/#comment-1081 Shari Smothers Tue, 24 May 2011 14:39:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6612#comment-1081 Hi Ami! I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the good wish for "fertile soil" to sift. I appreciate the encouragement. Hi Ami! I’m glad you like it, and thanks for the good wish for “fertile soil” to sift. I appreciate the encouragement.

]]> Comment on Informed by Shari Smothers http://slstellingstories.com/2011/05/informed/comment-page-1/#comment-1080 Shari Smothers Tue, 24 May 2011 14:06:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6612#comment-1080 Thanks for sharing that you can relate. It's nice to know I am connecting. And I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks for sharing that you can relate. It’s nice to know I am connecting. And I’m glad you liked the poem.

]]> Comment on Informed by Divya Sachdeva http://slstellingstories.com/2011/05/informed/comment-page-1/#comment-1079 Divya Sachdeva Tue, 24 May 2011 10:16:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6612#comment-1079 Just saw your post from She writes.. wonderful poem..loved the way it flows and the theme can be related so much :) Just saw your post from She writes.. wonderful poem..loved the way it flows and the theme can be related so much :)

]]> Comment on Informed by Mattison http://slstellingstories.com/2011/05/informed/comment-page-1/#comment-1078 Mattison Mon, 23 May 2011 16:42:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6612#comment-1078 Nice, Shari! I really like the ending and its shifting through "poetical fodder." Hopefully, you'll find the fertile soil to produce more great poetry! Thanks for sharing! Nice, Shari! I really like the ending and its shifting through “poetical fodder.” Hopefully, you’ll find the fertile soil to produce more great poetry! Thanks for sharing!

]]> Comment on Informed by Elizabeth Young http://slstellingstories.com/2011/05/informed/comment-page-1/#comment-1077 Elizabeth Young Mon, 23 May 2011 05:53:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6612#comment-1077 Great poem! I completely relate to it. As much as we don't like so much of what goes on in the world it does give us fodder with which to write. Beautifully expressed here...  Great poem! I completely relate to it. As much as we don’t like so much of what goes on in the world it does give us fodder with which to write. Beautifully expressed here… 

]]> Comment on Lackluster by Jingle http://slstellingstories.com/2011/04/lackluster/comment-page-1/#comment-1065 Jingle Wed, 13 Apr 2011 14:22:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6492#comment-1065 Glad to discover your poetry talent, join poets rally. make poetic friends, get encouragements via awards. come on in, the collection is to be closed within 25 hours. cheers. hope to see you in ASAP….. your talent rocks. visit me now…………. http://www.thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/. Glad to discover your poetry talent,

join poets rally.
make poetic friends, get encouragements via awards.

come on in, the collection is to be closed within 25 hours.

cheers.

hope to see you in ASAP…..

your talent rocks.

visit me now………….

http://www.thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/.

]]> Comment on Optimism by Shari Smothers http://slstellingstories.com/2011/04/optimism/comment-page-1/#comment-1064 Shari Smothers Sun, 10 Apr 2011 23:49:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6543#comment-1064 What can I say? Nursery rhymes, fables and songs run around in the background of my mind and occasionally come out to play. I appreciate your comment. What can I say? Nursery rhymes, fables and songs run around in the background of my mind and occasionally come out to play. I appreciate your comment.

]]> Comment on Rescued by Shari Smothers http://slstellingstories.com/2011/04/rescued/comment-page-1/#comment-1063 Shari Smothers Sun, 10 Apr 2011 23:47:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6553#comment-1063 Hi, Tre. It was longer. Deciding on a Haiku form was an intriguing challenge. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting and sharing. Hi, Tre. It was longer. Deciding on a Haiku form was an intriguing challenge. I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting and sharing.

]]> Comment on Optimism by trE http://slstellingstories.com/2011/04/optimism/comment-page-1/#comment-1062 trE Sun, 10 Apr 2011 20:03:00 +0000 http://slstellingstories.com/?p=6543#comment-1062 A twist on the Itsy, Bitsy Spider and it was definitely worth the read. I could see the action taking place in each line. Definitely a sound version of an old nursery rhyme. A twist on the Itsy, Bitsy Spider and it was definitely worth the read. I could see the action taking place in each line. Definitely a sound version of an old nursery rhyme.

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