My eyes are closed
my mind alert
for signs the sun
may have arrived
before me today.


Peeping out
from behind my lids
I find I won
even though
I laid down my head
only just three hours ago.

© 2011 Shari Lynne Smothers

About Shari Smothers

Welcome to Telling Stories, my creative writing space. My name is Shari Smothers. Poems help me to understand the world and to explain my world to others. They're my premier story telling tools. There's more to come, so please share with me through reading, commenting, emailing. Learn more about Shari here. And do come again!

2 thoughts on “Early

  1. Shari,
    what a clever piece.  I really like your word choices, simple, but highly effective.  You nailed that 1st stanza

  2. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Stacy. I like the first part too. 🙂

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