Mine

I see in youMy Mom & Dad, Mackie & Helen
hopes and dreams,
mine —
sketched broad,
like soft brush strokes of clouds,
white on a mesmerizing
blue background;

Seedlings of a future,
mine —
tended by loving hands,
nurtured by warm sunlight,
blossoming into a fragrant garden
of beautiful flowers,
the sweetest fruit,
and gorgeous evergreens;

Friendship divine,
mine —
my heaviest moments are
spirited away
on luminous wings,
my brightest times are
enjoyed with you;

A promise,
mine —
that I am held safely,
sincerely
for all time,
secure from the world,
safe in love unconditional.

I see you,
I know I will breathe again.
I am eager for our tomorrows
because I recognize and realize
the best parts of me are
inspired by you.
And I am thankful that you are
mine.

©2002 by Shari Lynne Smothers



I wrote this poem for my brother’s wedding. My sister-in-law (to be, at the time) requested that I write something for their wedding. I didn’t know that I could pull it off; I had doubts for many reasons. After time, journaling, and a bad draft or two, I unearthed these words.

And, in case you’re wondering, the photograph is from my parents’ wedding, not my brother and sister-in-law.

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  • http://wordsforhirellc.com/blog Karen Swim

    Shari, this is beautiful! I am so glad that technology enables us to discover what we missed. You should write poetry more often!

    Karen

  • http://wordsforhirellc.com/blog Karen Swim

    Shari, this is beautiful! I am so glad that technology enables us to discover what we missed. You should write poetry more often!

    Karen

  • http://slstellingstories.com Shari Smothers

    Thanks, Karen. I’m glad you liked it. I’ve been appreciating the magic behind technology a lot lately.

    I do plan to get back to writing more poetry, but I do put many things before it. Thank you for the words of encouragement.

    Shari

  • Shari Smothers

    Thanks, Karen. I’m glad you liked it. I’ve been appreciating the magic behind technology a lot lately.

    I do plan to get back to writing more poetry, but I do put many things before it. Thank you for the words of encouragement.

    Shari

  • http://confidentwriting.com/ Joanna Young

    What a beautiful poem for a wedding Shari. I love the repetition of mine, and the way it’s spoken not out of fear or the desire to possess, but real love.

    Just lovely.

    Thanks for sharing it.

  • http://confidentwriting.com Joanna Young

    What a beautiful poem for a wedding Shari. I love the repetition of mine, and the way it’s spoken not out of fear or the desire to possess, but real love.

    Just lovely.

    Thanks for sharing it.

  • http://slstellingstories.com Shari Smothers

    Joanna, I’m glad you like it. Thank you for saying so. And your interpretation is right on the nose.

    I’m glad I shared it. Though, admittedly, it took a measure of audacity that I don’t generally practice. And, you helped me tap into that. I seem to be working it out.

  • Shari Smothers

    Joanna, I’m glad you like it. Thank you for saying so. And your interpretation is right on the nose.

    I’m glad I shared it. Though, admittedly, it took a measure of audacity that I don’t generally practice. And, you helped me tap into that. I seem to be working it out.

  • http://confidentwriting.com/ Joanna Young

    Oh Shari, thank you. It makes me feel so good to hear you say that.

  • http://confidentwriting.com Joanna Young

    Oh Shari, thank you. It makes me feel so good to hear you say that.

  • http://slstellingstories.com Shari Smothers

    I’m glad, Joanna. You should know that your work helps me a lot. I just don’t get a chance to say it often.

  • Shari Smothers

    I’m glad, Joanna. You should know that your work helps me a lot. I just don’t get a chance to say it often.

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